Jargon junk

This text was was written by a marketing person with excellent spoken English, as part of an exercise for the in-house magazine in which various departments explain their role in the business to other people in the company. I was asked to correct any grammatical and spelling mistakes, and to turn the jargon into everyday English for a broad readership. 

Click on the links to read the texts – first the original, then the edited version.

Channel Management original PDF

Channel Management text edited PDF

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